Feeling All Musical

Morning everyone (if there's any)
I've been working on something since yesterday. A song. Yes, a song. I'm not musician by the way. But somehow I'm getting inspirations to write this song. It's still undergoing changes and everything. It's an R&B song. Heavilly influnced by Mariah Carey (maybe because Ihave been listening to her current songs lately).

Here''s the lyrics

From the first time that I saw your face, I know my heart would go on race
The smile of you makes me fly, The eyes of you make me high
I never thought I’d have this feeling, So deep inside it’s tingling
Please tell me what to do babe?

(And then now you’re here) I’m on fire
(And then now you’re here) My heart keeps beatin’ faster
(And then now you’re here)You’re givin’ me real fever
With you I wanna be forever

(Baby I love you)
I’m singing you this song
(Baby I need you)
I’ll be here all night long
(Baby I want you)
I want you too babe
Come on listen to me..


But, stop!
I thought, that our love will stay for long
But I guess I’m just so very wrong
You’re feelin’ for me isn’t strong
And you lied to me babe, all along
I never thought that you’ll be lying
I’m cryin’, I’m dying
How could this be hapennin’ to me now?

(And our love is gone) I’m all alone
(And our love is gone) I should have known
(And our love is gone)
And I’m leavin’ now, gonna take bow

(Baby I love you)
How could you do this to me?
(Baby I need you)
But I can’t be stayin’ here
(Baby I want you)
Please keep your sorry
Please keep your sorry

(Baby I love you)
That’s enough
(Baby I need you)
I trust you no more
(Baby I want you)
No baby, no baby

No, no, and I gotta go,
Goodbye.

Oh yeah, oh yeah.
Oh yeah, oh yeah,

p/s: Hopefully I can transform it into a REAL song! Heh!

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{ Unknown } at: 10:57 AM said...

gud luck..
hehe.. hope jadi lagu nnt.. k